Blind Dancer Poem by Marieta Maglas

Blind Dancer

Rating: 5.0


The blue, blind dancer slips on the floor,
And enhances the movement itself in an icy dance.
This woman is transformed
Alternatively
Into a bluebird
And vice versa.
More accurately,
She becomes a birdwoman
For an absolute motion.
From the depth of her soul,
Divine lights
Begin to overflow the space.
Small crystal pieces belonging to her sad feeling
Become roughly cube-shaped pieces of ice.
They roll in the middle of nowhere.
The blue sound is necessary to expound those words
In a natural and ordinary sense...

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Thursday, May 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,dance,dancing,bird
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyssa Haley 18 November 2009

Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it. I guess you deserve 10

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Edward Parsley 18 November 2009

Some strong words, some wisedom within........great write! 10

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Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

A beautifully worded poem 10

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Jeremy Wright 18 November 2009

This poem brought tears in my eyes... 10

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Afzal Shauq 06 November 2009

For an absolute motion. From the depth of her soul, Divine lights Begin to overflow The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning wow what a perfect and meaningful poem.. expressed in a very poetic and sweet way..innovation in thought and the composition of words and verses is professionally done... love this poem...hmmm really a great and very great one..10/10

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Elena Sandu 13 March 2010

I fly with this words, thank you for sharing! Lovely! !

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Sandra Fowler 14 February 2010

Your blind dancer is a poem in blue. Very compelling and beautiful. Your words have wings.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Manuel Odeny 05 January 2010

Beautiful description will words potrayed vivvidly. ++10

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Marieta Maglas 01 December 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Maegan Trafford 18 November 2009

very meaningful write, well penned.... 10

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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