Painting Poem by Marieta Maglas


Rating: 4.9

I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.

I'm drawing the line of your oval eyes,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each winking of yours,
Until it becomes only the memory of your sight.

I'm drawing the line of your elliptical lips,
This beauty of your lips,
Which is dwindling concentrically
With each whisper
Until it becomes only the memory of your word.

I'm drawing your great feeling,
As a noble heart,
Which is eccentrically enlarging,
Until I can touch you
To become one soul.

Vidi Writes 18 October 2009

Diminishing circle and his spiral face Diminishing eyes, so is the wink on his face Elliptical lips and his irresistible words Enlarged heart stands a witness to union of souls. No wonder, such an inspiration has brought out this poem Smooth, silky feelings and paintings have drawn a forum Good read.

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Sandra Martyres 20 October 2009

Beautiful verse you have created here Mari with your concentric circles diminishing as the poem comes to life...10+++

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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HaZeM PaKKaR 20 October 2009

you could simply draw a funny painting.. i like the way you use your words/brush.. i will read it again and enjoy it more.. thanks4sharing! !

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Roxane Sarandon 25 October 2009

passsionate feelings of his vision...........

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Ramesh T A 06 November 2015

Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 October 2010

Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

nicely penned here! wow, you are good!

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Melody Song 10 December 2009

Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

Well this was painted wonderfully...

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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