Painting Poem by Marieta Maglas


Rating: 4.9

I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.

I'm drawing the line of your oval eyes,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each winking of yours,
Until it becomes only the memory of your sight.

I'm drawing the line of your elliptical lips,
This beauty of your lips,
Which is dwindling concentrically
With each whisper
Until it becomes only the memory of your word.

I'm drawing your great feeling,
As a noble heart,
Which is eccentrically enlarging,
Until I can touch you
To become one soul.

Terri Turrell 09 November 2009

as both a poet and an artist I have to say I really like where you go with this poem. very nice symble-ism!

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

passsionate feelings of his vision... 10

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Sarah Franks 28 October 2009

its amazing i love it. its a beautiful writting and the theme is wonderful 10+

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Mark Wahlberg 28 October 2009

you have painted the painting in such an natural way 10

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Ramesh T A 06 November 2015

Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 October 2010

Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

nicely penned here! wow, you are good!

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Melody Song 10 December 2009

Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

Well this was painted wonderfully...

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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