poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

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Painting

I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.

I'm drawing the line of your oval eyes,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each winking of yours,
Until it becomes only the memory of your sight.

I'm drawing the line of your elliptical lips,
This beauty of your lips,
Which is dwindling concentrically
With each whisper
Until it becomes only the memory of your word.

I'm drawing your great feeling,
As a noble heart,
Which is eccentrically enlarging,
Until I can touch you
To become one soul.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 7, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, July 4, 2011

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (11/6/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/15/2010 2:08:00 AM)

    Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (1/12/2010 12:28:00 AM)

    nicely penned here! wow, you are good!

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  • Melody Song (12/10/2009 9:54:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism

    Thank you for sharing

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  • Eyan Desir (11/10/2009 5:13:00 PM)

    Well this was painted
    wonderfully...

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  • Terri Turrell (11/9/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    as both a poet and an artist I have to say I really like where you go with this poem. very nice symble-ism!

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/3/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: forever yours


    hello Marietta.
    I promise i will get deeper in your work.
    I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts.

    kind regards

    stuiterdick

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:33:00 PM)

    passsionate feelings of his vision...
    10

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  • Sarah Franks (10/28/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    its amazing i love it. its a beautiful writting and the theme is wonderful 10+

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  • Mark Wahlberg (10/28/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    you have painted the painting in such an natural way
    10

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  • Roxane Sarandon (10/25/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    passsionate feelings of his vision...........

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  • HaZeM PaKKaR (10/20/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    you could simply draw a funny painting..
    i like the way you use your words/brush..
    i will read it again and enjoy it more..
    thanks4sharing! !

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2:36:00 PM)

    From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: hi


    ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings.
    keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (10/20/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    Beautiful verse you have created here Mari with your concentric circles diminishing as the poem comes to life...10+++

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  • Vidi WritesVidi Writes (10/18/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    Diminishing circle and his spiral face
    Diminishing eyes, so is the wink on his face
    Elliptical lips and his irresistible words
    Enlarged heart stands a witness to union of souls.

    No wonder, such an inspiration has brought out this poem
    Smooth, silky feelings and paintings have drawn a forum

    Good read.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/18/2009 10:07:00 AM)

    From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Thanks Mari


    I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

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  • Jimmy Reed (10/18/2009 8:01:00 AM)

    These verses are written so beautifully............10

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  • Roy Martinez (10/16/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    Very poetic way of expressing your feelings and demarcation of set goals.............

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  • Gwenda Madison (10/9/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    I can well imagine the way you have touched life playing with the circles; leading one into another to harvest the uncontrollable soul as one.

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  • Jessica Hoffman (10/9/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    You have captured the very soul of poetry in your lines..........10

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