Painting Poem by Marieta Maglas
Painting
I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.
I'm drawing the line of your oval eyes,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each winking of yours,
Until it becomes only the memory of your sight.
I'm drawing the line of your elliptical lips,
This beauty of your lips,
Which is dwindling concentrically
With each whisper
Until it becomes only the memory of your word.
I'm drawing your great feeling,
As a noble heart,
Which is eccentrically enlarging,
Until I can touch you
To become one soul.
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
its amazing i love it. its a beautiful writting and the theme is wonderful 10+
Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!
Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing
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12/2/2023 8:26:06 AM # 1.0.0.1118
as both a poet and an artist I have to say I really like where you go with this poem. very nice symble-ism!