Blinded By The Dark Comments

Truly amazing

uniquely written well..gd wrk...keep writing dear..

an unique approach. please read some of mine. :)

Well, I disagree whit this line: ''Our lives are what we want it to be''! It's not always the way we want it. Who thinks of wars and killings? But there are so many victims. There is definitely determinism in many cases. It's not fake. Man suffers. Life is Bitter in my opinion. Truth! It's a nice word But the world and others do not accept it. People can't bear pure truth. Francis Bacon also said such ideas that naked truth is intolerable in his ''Of Truth''. I think being in darkness and invisible sometimes is much better than being under light and beaten by unimportant things. Antway. I hope my criticism and comment won't bother you. I'd like to know your comments on my poems too. Thanks.

Yet I'd rather be blinded by the dark For the dark will hold my real fate. The theme of the poem summarized here.