One by one,
They fall;
the red clots of my blood...
And all I can do is
watch helplessly,
Wide-eyed, fascinated,
with my whole body in a spasm of pain,
while they fall,
One by one,
The red clots of my blood...
Overt words talking of blood and the accompanying pain but make us see the laserations inflicted by somebody so close to us. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Selection of words are absolutely fantastic. It expresses your dynamic will n emotions.
Beautiful flow of words. Very true said, we can only watch helplessely with pain...Loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An impressive poem, but you did not write the significance of 4-11-1986.