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A Cloud Of Rain

Rating: 4.5
A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
I felt good, happy...
I no longer felt lonely.

I thought life would go on happily
In one long, long stretch of time...
But when the cold, harsh
winds of change started blowing,
The cloud of rain
had to drift away...

Life is still going on
In one long, long stretch of time...
I am not lonely.
I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
But you have left a void
That would take me
a long, long time to fill.
COMMENTS
Suresh Kumar Ek 26 August 2020
you have left an emptiness that would take time to feel. nice
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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2020
Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can relate to this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing
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Sehdev Sharma 12 December 2019
great words madam.......good
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Jaya Agarwal 09 September 2019
Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time- - - great expression- - -beautiful work- - - 10
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Savita Tyagi 30 July 2019
Hearttouching words straight out of the heart. It is so heard to fill the void left by the absence of a loved one. Time heals surly but slowly.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 May 2019
A dark cloud of rain drifted into my life And for some time, I felt good, happy... I no longer felt lonely....so touching and true. Whatever dark the night be it must get morning. This is really a beautiful poem on life on A philosophical ground.
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Prabir Gayen 03 January 2019
Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time... I am not lonely. I can't say I am sad or unhappy. But you have left a void That would take me a long, long time to fill.....fine expression dear poetess..
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the pain change gives..lovely caption
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Israj Ali 08 October 2018
Life is still going on In one long, long stretch of time- - - - A very good work
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2018
I can't say I am sad or unhappy/But you have left a void/That would take me a long, long time to fill......I find a great poetic beauty here! A fascinating piece of poetry dear madam!
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