Bloom Poem by Lamerre Lucie

Bloom

Rating: 5.0


In your eyes,
Hundreds of little shiny stars;

In your hand,
Life ready to be sculpted;

In your heart,
Way too much space and loneliness.

But if you'd let me
Come to you;
If you'd let me love
You too;

Heart and hand and eyes
Would be,
Whole in love for
Eternity.

Bloom
Sunday, January 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: vulnerability
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 24 January 2016

Eternity of love glorified through this beautiful verse. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 24 January 2016

Love is eternal. So beautiful work. Thanks for sharing your feelings with this nice poem..

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