Blue Whale Birthday Poem by shirin sheikhi

Blue Whale Birthday

Rating: 5.0


It supposed to be
A fantastic time
The most memorable
Birthday of mine
When I turned
In second years of life
Every thing in blue
But my mother heart
Filled with vivacity
In bright white
Ocean in dark blue
Sky in light one
Sun shined
I had a riddle of sphinx so far
My mother told me:
What's that sweet heart?
Id like to know
What's blood like?
Oh! It's in the scenes
Not appropriate
For children's eyes
In the hunts, disputes
Competitions, fights
I'm craving thee never
Find its color out
Now look the gigantic liner
In horizon line
And accept as present
This piece of advice
Never trust in
Every member of mankind
Though has a grandiose claim
Of civilization type
Some are vicious
Aggressive, wild
Like the features
Gathered in killer sharks
Swim down when you see
Ships or yachts
Even don’t breathe
To help them find your sign
He might be the one
Depicting blood in your mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soulful Heart 11 January 2012

a motherly advice so beautifully woven into words................colour of red indeed is something we pray our kids never have to suffer ever.............well written..............

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Kazi Ahmed 27 September 2011

Very strong words. Good construction.Lots of mix and matches.Good reading.Thanks.Please also read my poems.

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Fay Slimm 21 May 2009

Told as advice from Mother Whale to offspring - this is a very good innovative theme Shirin - -and written with flair and pathos... it has my 10 from Fay

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you are not selfish at all... you don't have your world revolving around you.. I love he insight in the poem.. you are a great poet.

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