At night sky seems
brilliantly spangled
by shiny stars
To those on earth
meanwhile there is no light
but at every single moment of time
earth seems illuminated
by some spectacular hearts
to those in the skies
meanwhile nowadays
earth is almost in the dark
even with this apparent light
earth still moves with spectacular heaerts darkness would disappear when brilliant sun would come.....quite evocatively humanistic, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
Shirin it really was wonderful, i loved it. i guess u r right earth is dark when u look down but there r still some people that light up the earth with their smile exactly like the stars in the sky.
theme of your poem is bitter despite of your name! but i love it! sadly it's real and we must see to it and sherraged! keep on please!
My heart is awlays enlightened by the bright side of the earth, the most beautiful home............created by God.
earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light... a realization that almost all poets make you have written down Shirin thank you
'apparent light '______very symbolic. Real poetic.Thanks.++10.
but at every single moment of time earth seems illuminated by some spectacular hearts liked these lines dear Shirin.... you are poetic. lot of good ideas in ur poem. thank you for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great exhibition of humanism. Superb read, indeed.