Blues In Em (Transitional) Comments

The lack of brightness though shown in this poem yet has been conveyed to the readers so splendidly in a way that has maintained the harmonic patterens of feelings of low spirits. The description of musical methodology in reference to the cure of cleansing of a soul is just amazing....

I bet you had your gutar in your lap when you wrote this one, Beautiful thoughts, Nicely said.

Gorgeous.... just the mention of the guitar had me going! ! ! Loved it, your friend would be very lucky to have all of those aforementioned gestures from you. Beautiful poem. HG: -) xx

'But I would play a melody to cure you of your ills, I’d take it from a minor into a major key' A moving composition with a positive approach.10+++

Spot on mate ' Loved this imaginative rendition Best Steve

A cherishing poem, in perfectly romantic rhyme. You certainly lifted the blues in this heart, there is nothing like a man with his guitar to do that. so pleased at your progression... Smiling at you Tai

Fink, I'm with the Dear there... and add most bloostiful...