Brain Damage Poem by Barry Middleton

Brain Damage

Rating: 5.0


Love went out like satin night
unnoticed in narcotic dreams.
Love left me doped like a black star,
like a pillow made of stone.

Satin, soft one,
your eyes were wet as birth,
and exactly brown.

My hangover is gone
like silk opium into the worm.

It hurt me more to lose my mind
than to lose you.

And yet, my granite sobriety,
asylum gray,
whispers nightly excuses
of how I want to love you
in old, hypnotic dreams,
and laced with the softness
of a tender, breathless embrace.

Brain Damage
Tuesday, April 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was a keeper at the asylum, not a patient. But the patients taught me a lot about the commonality of human existence.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Norah Tunney 19 April 2016

This poem has a heart stirring sadness to it and laced with the softness of a tender breathless embrace beautiful! ! Also love the imagary in the first 4 lines Thank you Barry

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Barry Middleton 20 April 2016

Thank you Norah, I am delighted by your comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2016

Like a black star! ! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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