Tuesday, December 10, 2019

Brave And Their Battles - Viii Comments

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When shoulder to shoulder we walk,
And march in, enemies to block,
We move when in forward gear,
All them foes tremble in fear.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2019

WE SHOULD have brotherhood and love and peace. No one likes war. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 December 2019

Yes, with all the bravery and sacrifice showed in the battlefield, 'there is still nothing like peace and love, so well said Kumarmaniji.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2019

This poem puts spotlight on unity fostering strength...well penned sir......10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 December 2019

Unity fostering strength, well said, dear poet. Thanks for this discerning feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 December 2019

unity yeah there is strength and here victory has no length!

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 December 2019

Yes indeed, a victory after a great battle has only height from the bravery that was shown in fight. Thank you dear poet.

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