Wednesday, November 27, 2019

Bread For Breakfast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forget fair breakfast of fish— instead,
Today we'll have to make do with bread.
Thank God for small mercies,
Man a litter-bug is,
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Valsa George 29 November 2019

Man is not concerned about the escalating pollution and the death of many species of creatures. But birds and beasts have greater intuition of what is going to happen in the near future. A meaningful limerick with an excellent image to match with it!

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 November 2019

Your analysis is always spot on, many of my limericks try and make the readers think and read what is left unsaid. Thanks dear poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2019

A brilliant Limerick is amazingly presented by you dear Pathak sir. Thanks for sharing with Poet's Note.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Yea, I thought without the notes it may not be as clear as it should be. Thanks for lovely words and rating dear KM.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

beautiful description about the picture// beautiful limerick

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Yes indeed, I saw the picture and its narrative came to my mind. You're absolutely right, dear MB

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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