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Break Of Day In The Trenches

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The darkness crumbles away
It is the same old druid Time as ever,
Only a live thing leaps my hand,
A queer sardonic rat,
As I pull the parapet's poppy
To stick behind my ear.
Droll rat, they would shoot you if they knew
Your cosmopolitan sympathies,
Now you have touched this English hand
You will do the same to a German

Soon, no doubt, if it be your pleasure
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Terry Craddock 07 September 2020

This war was a scare upon the human psyche, which intensified as it continued to drag on, for four long years. It scared civilization at the time and service personal who fought in The Great War were scared, for the rest of their lives. Unfortunately our global civilization has not learned to stop sabre rattling and heartfelt embrace peace. I wrote the poem 'Sardonic Rats Fearless Welcome Break Of Day', inspired by the poem 'Break Of Day In The Trenches' by the poet Isaac Rosenberg.

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Lynn Braben 10 November 2019

Hearbreaking and full of emotion

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Tom Allport 03 April 2017

a brilliantly descriptive poem of a day in the life of an English soldier poet? ...............superbly written.

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Terry Craddock 09 August 2014

Almost a surrealist first few lines, to immortalize break of dawn, picking a poppy over the parapet, in a Great War trench; echoing through time.

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Poem Baby Cakes 17 September 2009

it is a great poem that has touched my heart and i know see why members of my local club encouraged me to read it

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