Breakup 5 Poem by Lipika Ghosh

Breakup 5

Rating: 5.0


It's suffocating
This smoky damp room
Shouldn't we leave soon?
Let me correct
Shouldn't I leave soon?
Shouldn't you leave soon?

Water drops rolling
It's salty
But
It's not tear
A pinch of salt mixed with water
Should we cry?
Let me correct
Should I cry?
Should you cry?
we didn't write a single poem together...

Saturday, November 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maira Eliz 01 December 2017

Huh...a different kind of good

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Hazel Durham 26 November 2017

Beautiful write with mesmerising imagery that draws the reader in and leaves the reader intrigued!

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2017

Nice portrayal of uncertainty in a relationship with a tinge of mysticism. Thanks.

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