It's suffocating
This smoky damp room
Shouldn't we leave soon?
Let me correct
Shouldn't I leave soon?
Shouldn't you leave soon?
Water drops rolling
It's salty
But
It's not tear
A pinch of salt mixed with water
Should we cry?
Let me correct
Should I cry?
Should you cry?
we didn't write a single poem together...
Beautiful write with mesmerising imagery that draws the reader in and leaves the reader intrigued!
Nice portrayal of uncertainty in a relationship with a tinge of mysticism. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Huh...a different kind of good