Breakup4 Poem by Lipika Ghosh

Breakup4

Rating: 5.0


Your faded face
Icy cold
Your dull vision

I am crossing the field
A road side bench and one old couple
Narrating memories about their newly married days
You standing alone
Soon after you wont see me

Your faded face
Like ash
No spark in your eyes
No fire anymore
Wind blowing
Soon after darkness will cover
Melancholic screaming cry spreading around
Countdown began

Is there anything between us?
Love or more than that?
Your faded face
Like dead fish
Pale eyes

I am going far, crossing the field
A road side bench and that old couple
You are standing alone
Wind blowing.

Thursday, November 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 26 November 2017

The reality of the coldness of your ex as you see him in the distance and the cold reality of the situation! Superb write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Going far from perception crossing the roadside field and bench in sadness amazes mind. Wisely penned poem is shared.10

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 November 2017

A beautiful poem and nicely penned.... All the best. PC

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

It is beautiful blues poem having touching expression. The sadness of this poem is astutely depicted. Thank u dear Lipika for sharing this poem.10

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Gajanan Mishra 23 November 2017

no spark in eyes, no fire, good one

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