Breakup Poem by Lipika Ghosh

Breakup

Rating: 5.0


It's not wrong
All the night I write
I delete
again I write new
Moulted baremoonlight dimming
Upon windowpane
Then disappeared
It's not wrong
All the night I remember
I forget
And I do not remember again
I write saddest line then.

Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 26 November 2017

I love this original and beautiful write and thank you for sharing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2017

The last line will enrich your expression in due course..a fabulous poem is shared..10

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Lipika. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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