Breakup 3 Poem by Lipika Ghosh

Breakup 3

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Is it blue or deep dark?
Is it rebirth or Earth collapsed?
still I am writing my own
And about those around me
I am standing beside a shore
Waves gone far
Sands moving beneath toe

Is it dark or deep blue?
Still I am alive
Same Earth though
I refuse to see morning glow
I refuse to see anymore.

Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 26 November 2017

Brilliant write that has great impact of heartbreaking moments, thank you for sharing!

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 November 2017

stand on shore is lovely dipping toe on sand and washing away the mud in the morning glow.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2017

I sense through this poem a sparkling future Keep the balls rolling..10

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