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Breathing Machine

Rating: 4.1

I have a breathing machine
I use it when my lungs are dirty
blocked with soot or feathers
or when there is too much moisture
in all of the air around me

and I need to take a sip to breathe

I have a breathing machine
I use it when I breathe out my dreams

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Martin O'Neill 05 March 2012

Jeez Jimi, no-one ever cut me like that one. That one hit a deep deep target.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 December 2009

Impressive, introspective, and very well written. The thought/idea is an eye opener and cause the reader to reflect, particularly the last lines. 10++++ Cynthia

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