A Frank Discussion Poem by Jimi Doyle

A Frank Discussion

Rating: 4.1


Here is the serenity:
it fell out as we entered the cab

Here is the loyalty:
Tammy Wynette singing that song again

Here is the courage:
blinded staggered down

Here is the sacrifice:
rusted in cans

Here is the wisdom:
bursting forth with steady double hunger

Here is the faith:
pleading with the executioner
afraid at last

Here is the joy:
siezed in crumbled robbery

Here is the promise:
sea pines and the scent of the sea
the rain bird starts a song

Here is the love:
reduced to stymied poetry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 15 March 2014

Original with great lines, I really liked this lovely write!

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Pilar Mogollon 14 July 2008

ah sweet, i like the visual.

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Joscephine Gomez 12 May 2007

Beautiful! The style of expression sounds original to me.

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Susan Bagley 02 December 2006

another nice one........... Smiles :) SusanB

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Zinc Truism 06 April 2005

Very nice indeed. Lovely, striking ending. Consider cutting it, though. You'd get the same effect in half the verses.

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