Breathless Poem by Ash Desrocher

Breathless

Rating: 5.0


Rereading all the messages

Tracing over any paragraph I find

Crying wondering why you just changed

No warning, no trace of you left

Alone yet again, living with your shadow, trying to

Piece it together as it fades away,

Giving me no room to breathe

Holding my breath, wishing for freedom

Trying to grab the fading pieces of you

As it all fades to black

Yearning to just have you back.

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Targeted of course.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 09 November 2022

I feel your loss that you express so well in yr poems. Keep writing and read John Keats poems, he was in a similar position too.

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