Four Sacred Words Poem by Ash Desrocher

Four Sacred Words

Rating: 5.0


I miss the lower school,
where you and I could just stay friends,
with no repercussions,
cause you and I were just kids then,
who didn't know how to act.

Now we're teenagers,
going into high school,
we have different tastes in music,
friends,
art,
but we both like one another,
but god stands between us,
pushing us apart,
religion is the most important thing to you,
I never quite understood,
how a god could mean so much to you.

I never understood why when I said 'I love you'...
you couldn't respond back with four simple words,
that I wished to hear,
I wished you could use the intelligence that you were born with,
that I admired,
to see,
that all I really needed most,
was to hear,
or simply feel,
those four sacred words.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D.N. Rebb 19 April 2023

What a powerful poem! Is the weight of faith a burden at times?

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Ash Desrocher 19 April 2023

Yes it can be, it's a huge burden when it wants to be.

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D.N. Rebb 19 April 2023

What a powerful P

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Kim Barney 18 April 2023

Unrequited love is the most painful kind. This poem is well written. Keep writing.

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