Breeze Of Life Poem by Arabambi Obaloluwa

Breeze Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Oh! Belligerent breeze of life
Surrender your sword and spear
Take a stroll and never look back
For the waters needs to take a nap

Oh! Belligerent breeze of life
Don't you think enough is enough
Haven't you received enough sheep's for sacrifice?
Rule wasn't made for you alone

Oh! Belligerent breeze of life
It is high time you relinquish your seat
The trees are pleading for calmness
For the soothing air has turned chilling

Oh! Belligerent breeze of life
Take heed and be calm
Shamefully cover your head with peace
For no one is convenient with your tune any longer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sochukwu Ivye 06 October 2017

I enjoyed seeing this. Versification could further justify the presentation. Much kudos, poet.

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Arabambi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 August 2017

Rule wasn't made for you alone Oh! Belligerent breeze of life It is high time you relinquish your seat... Nice poem...Thanks for these debut attempts.. 10 for it. Subhas

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Chinedu Dike 21 August 2017

Good rendition of words. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Arabambi.

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