Wednesday, September 25, 2019

Bricks Of Guilt Comments

Rating: 5.0

When wisdom weighed me down, I kept mouth shut,
So behaves one of three we call discreet,
Who never fingers of their own would cut,
Who'd let an axe fall upon one's own feet?
...
Read full text

Aniruddha Pathak
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2019

A wonderful write imbued with wisdom. Insightful and perceptive. Liked the title of this poem.So apt for the brilliant thoughts conveyed by the great Poet.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 26 September 2019

Thank you dear poet, sometimes I feel the burden of such good words. You being such a good poet yourself, I'm sure you must have something to say against, please feel free.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2019

A brilliant sonnet has been properly delineated keeping a nice title " Bricks Of Guilt" . The concluding lines are much impressive. I like to cite here....We oft our own help a burial vault built, / Blissfully blind, we bestow bricks of guilt. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 25 September 2019

Thanks for your words of appreciation dear KM

0 0
Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

Beautiful Sonnet, dear Poet. Full of wisdom conveyed. I have enjoyed this excellent Sonnet through and through. A 10 Full Score and myriad 10´s more. More enjoyment in reading this time and again. Thank you for sharing..Nothing but the truth in your ardent Sonnet. God´s Blessings in Abundance.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 25 September 2019

Thank you so much for some good words about the sonnet, and 'God; s Blessings in abundance' for me, so kind of you, dear poet.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success