Monday, March 9, 2015

Bridal-Tidal Comments

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A boat on the shore, and
Tide on the sea,
Both were at their peak,
Boat is chancing to sail, and
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Susan Williams 25 October 2020

Boat is chancing to sail, and Sea rolling on its roll, Sea lifted hands and hugged the boat, Boat kissed the tide and within tide it lost, - - -what beautiful and original images

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2015

Boat on the shore floats on side of tide of sea. Curiously watching this indicates about nice humour. Wonderful poem shared really.

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