Briefly Seeing Poem by Smoky Hoss

Briefly Seeing

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Walking along side a river flowing
soft and slow,
walking along strolling
with no particular place to go -
Sunshine singing
a whole new song,
all nature is beaming
humming along -
I lay down upon the ground
to watch the day pass by,
there's always magic to be found
in the deep blue sky -
Fluffy clouds swim
in the great clear blue,
just above green leaves waving in the wind
anouncing new-born apples with a slight red hue -
Sunflowers dancing in glorious yellow
and standing magnificently tall,
seem to smile a happy hello
to one and all -
These summer days rare
and so very few,
give briefly, the mind of God to share
and a vision of life from a wonderful point of view -

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 29 July 2014

this reminds me of the other day when I took my six year old daughter fishing. when it was time to go home she made me carry her, and it was a hot day for sure. A wonderful poem.

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Sara Fielder 23 July 2014

You have captured the sense of euphoria one feels when they connect with nature Smoky. A gorgeous piece of writing. Very colorful and vivid.

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Eugene Levich 19 July 2014

What a lovely and happy vision and landscape- it makes one relax and wish to be lying right beside that stream. Thank you Smoky!

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