Dragonfly Moment Poem by Smoky Hoss

Dragonfly Moment

Rating: 5.0


Today on the trail
the temperature high
the humidity heavy
like a beast of burden-
The air and sun engaged a wager
that I would not endure.
While the sun scolded my spirit and
the wind withered my will
I onward rode-
Moving along in this self-imposed torture,
nearly 'tossing in the towel',
I saw dragonflies...
Dragonflies.
They seemed so nonchalant,
peaceful, still, content,
basking in the harsh heat
and burning rays of intense illumination.
They had no sunglasses
(that I could see) ,
no sweat on brow
(that I could tell) ,
they were so unperturbed
in their singular purpose of enjoyment,
of being in only this very moment,
one in which they completely live, undaunted.
Here, now, is where they reside, and
they love it-
Renewed in spirit and will
I pushed onward,
even enjoying the moment,
the heat and humidity,
the challenge to survive.
Looking back at my inspiration
(the dragonflies)
I smile, knowing they tipped the scale,
stacked the deck in my favor.
The elements lost the bet.
My heart endured, even flew.
Like the dragonflies,
I was completely in the moment, and
I loved it!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 April 2022

I fell in love with this poem, Smoky. Thank God we are blessed by such moments that give us the encouragement to ride on... a thousand stars on this and I also faved it so I would reread and reread

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Kim Barney 16 April 2022

Your dragonfly moment is a moment to be remembered, and I have added this five-star poem to my favorites.

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One of the oldest surviving inhabitants of earth, dragon flies endure extreme conditions easily. This idea is concealed most subtly in the poem, to corroborate the positive energy that exudes the poem.

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2. Fantastic, smoky.5 *s and Myfav

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 18 April 2022

These little moments sum up to make the life eventful. Full ******

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Rob Lamberton 16 November 2022

Dragonflies have inspired me too. Creation is a marvel!

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Glen Kappy 31 May 2022

Smoky, good soul, I smile and appreciate, they had no sunglasses. Glad to see you continue writing. I haven't written a poem in a while, and I have I haven't posted to PH. Keep the faith, brother. -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2022

Let me quote-'basking in the harsh heat and burning rays of intense illumination. They had no sunglasses (that I could see) , no sweat on brow (that I could tell) , they were so unperturbed in their singular purpose of enjoyment, '

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2022

What does the idiom'Living in the moment ' signify? Find it in this poem.A marvellous poem, thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 25 April 2022

sing to me of dragonflies, my friend, on my ride through the desert... I keep being drawn back to this poem

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