From the time I strive to be immersed
An army of thoughts attack my heart!
Opposite to my hesitating pens
Boiling blood runs to Super One!
Just one gaze is fair enough
But let's hope a smile you'll award!
I'm dying for taking your breaths
I'm trying to meet your need;
Even though mine can't be masterpieces
Why don't you praise me before you leave! !
A very nice write Eindary - you still young and you have time to develop your poetical talents. Keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very entertaining piece. I think you are very right. Any praise spoken to us will certainly allow us to be in the heavenly abode, giving us that joy in the heart to be valued and recognized. This is a very human and common need. Thanks for writing this.