Darkangel Flyfree

Rookie - 54 Points (11/29/82)

Broken - Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

I smile because i have to
i breathe because i have to
i live only to please others
when still not good enough
i write to ease the pain
but still not good enough
i pretend to be happy
when really im not
on the inside
broken and slowly dying
day in and day out
nothing but tears
drowning my broken heart
you say you love me
when really all you do
is break me
in tiny little pieces
and crush me to the ground
chained up under your whim
where you have me
you don't see the hurt you caused
or the tears that spill down
from emerald eyes
im broken and you don't even see it.


Comments about Broken by Darkangel Flyfree

  • (5/1/2013 4:41:00 AM)


    I'm broken and you don't even see it ...... Excellent expression which i loved..... you have a very good poem here about being Hit By Sorrow about being broken apart....... i really liked it..... hope you came through this state of soul since last year ....... keep it up
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  • Thoughts Of A Poet (8/6/2012 12:19:00 PM)


    that was a good poem i love it sooooooooo much (Report) Reply

  • Hamid Negah (7/27/2012 12:05:00 PM)


    very nice i enjoyed so much. (Report) Reply

  • Black On Black Arts (7/19/2012 10:28:00 PM)


    that poem hits home we are more alike than i expected you are an angel of poetic grace forever flying forever free (Report) Reply

  • Anne P Murray (ladeeanne) (7/17/2012 11:02:00 PM)


    Very sad, but I'm sure most of can relate to the pain you are so elequently have written about (Report) Reply

  • Lady Keva (6/5/2012 9:49:00 AM)


    Love this poem I can relate (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 31, 2012



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