Broken Beauty Poem by Srushti Dodamani

Broken Beauty

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She was messy but brilliant,
Her weakness were her strengths,
Her sensitivity built her up
And other times destroyed her.
There were no in betweens with her.
She loved intensely,
Felt deeply,
Laughed loudly,
And cried like it rains.
She was brave...she was strong..she could pass by
As fragile
But she was not,
Shewas born to stand out
Meant to make a change
She was a little insane..And I was terrified to lose
her.
She was a gem, a treasure, an unstable star..she
Didn't belong to this world.
She danced along with her art.yet she had a self
Destructive side, And I wanted to save her, hold her
Protect her,
I tried to control her, but she was free like a bird..
She couldn't be saved
I had to let go.
All I could do is love her,
and that's what I've done...
And what I will do,
Forever....

Friday, July 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 02 September 2020

good poem. read my poem Broken mirror

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Varsha M 31 July 2020

This one counts for a loud applause for every understanding with which this work is being created. Stupendously magnificent. And what I'll do forever... meaningful poem.

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