Broken Clock Poem by Mitta Xinindlu

Broken Clock

Rating: 5.0


Songs of sorrow sprung from my heart;
All I could think about was us falling apart.
Your mind was fully alarmed.
As such, there was no time to talk.
No words, only caughs;
I screamed like a bear
whose seared skin had fully bled.

***

I saw your face melt into tears.
Picture once perfect,
then turning into sharp spears.
Could I have saved us?
I thought,  "it's a must".
There's nothing on the book short;
I did all that I was taught.

***

Beauty slowly faded into pain.
Sad eyes,  nothing but distain;
parched lips, heart fully stained.
I broke us;
I lost our love in the wind.
This night marks our broken limb;
It seems, the scars are sealed.

***

Nomore clock for a token.
Our future is broken;
The past, we became.
Oh! What a shame.

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Broken Clock
Saturday, January 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up,loss,love and life,pain,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyvin Nash 11 June 2017

Wow true emotions reflected, love the tone and the punchlines more like my style...I like this poem, you put yourself in there...in the story brings a nice picture, the rhymes , the personification...line 7and 8 wonderful. Great work!!

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Kyvin Nash 11 June 2017

Wow true emotions reflected, love the tone and the punchlines more like my style...I like this poem, you put yourself in there...in the story brings a nice picture, the rhymes , the personification...line 7and 8 wonderful. Great work!!

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