Your Face Is Paradise Poem by Mitta Xinindlu

Your Face Is Paradise

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They say paradise is only in heaven
But they haven't seen your face like I have.
They haven't been greeted by your smile
and embraced by your words.
Your eyes light up like golden streets of Jerusalem.
Eyebrows so thick, resembling the full head of Samson's strength.
Lips so tender like soles of the disciple's feet
whose steps followed the King.
Chin so strong like the 300 men of Israel who fought armies of armies
and won the good battle over kings.
I have seen paradise in your face.

Your ears are so upright
like the walls of Jericho;
whose standing was against no men,
living or dead.
Whose strength the Higher Being could be the only one to challenge.
Jaws strong like the shields of Shaka Zulu's men
who fought and won battles
that left blood dripping on blood.
I have seen paradise in your face.

Your forehead is so elementary
like the American soldiers who fought in Iraq;
whose dedication to their country was no child's play.
Who left their families
and sacrificed their youth.
The lines of your forehead, perfectly drawn
like the rivers of Jordan;
all drawing to the red sea
in which men of Egypt perished.
Your beard is planted like lawns of Eden
where peace and life were gathered in full.
I have seen paradise in your face.

Your cheekbones are perfectly high and well built
like the stone built to mark the death of Rachel,
wife to Jacob of Israel.
Your cheeks are correctly angled
like the temple that king Solomon built,
which took him 13 years to complete.

Your eye sockets are full of life.
So wise like King Solomon himself,
who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth.
Your perfect hairline
reflects the number of years you have loved me
like a bible story told year after year indeed.
They say paradise is only in heaven;
I have seen paradise in your face.

Saturday, January 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 23 July 2019

An epic poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Mitta on winning the accolade...10++++

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Adeeb Alfateh 23 July 2019

Your eye sockets are full of life. So wise like King Solomon himself, who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth. Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me beautiful love reflected here great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2019

Your perfect hairline reflects the number of years you have loved me like a bible story told year after year indeed. They say paradise is only in heaven; I have seen paradise in your face.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem o n love is nicely executed..

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Bernard Snyder 23 July 2019

I love this poem. However, I did get a laugh at the part, " Your forehead is so elementary." Great stuff, and congrats' on the poem being chosen as 'POD.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2019

the love holy love made journey one soul to another soul one place to another place one era to another era and still alive......//

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Mitta Xinindlu 20 August 2019

Wow. Thanks, everyone, for the kind words. Thanks to PoemHunter for this as well. Let's keep writing :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 July 2019

" So wise like king Solomon himself Who chose wisdom over all riches of the earth." An amazing poem. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Lyn Paul 23 July 2019

Your words reflect true love. Very original and quite beautiful.

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Kim Barney 23 July 2019

A bit wordy but well written. Congratulations are in order for having this chosen as member poem of the day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 July 2019

That is a beautiful composition full of nice simile. Congrats on poem of day!

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