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Kabhi Nazrein milane zamaane beet jate hain
Kabhi nazrein churane mein zamaane beet jate hain
Kissi ne ankh b kholi, to sone ki nagri mein
Kissi ko ghar banana mein zamane beet jate hain
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waah! ala! ...ghazal mein behtari ki gunjaaish hai laikin majmooi taur per buhut zabardast kaavish hai...
sweet lil gal, bahuT khooB haiN aur bhee duniya meiN suKHanwar bohot achche kehte haiN ki 'GHalib' ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur wahi andaaz tujh meiN hai
kya baat hai...wah wah...wah actually great words dear.......nice one.....keep writing
Umr-e-javed ki dua kerte Faiz itne wo kab humarey thay, , a 10 from me
Wo rishte jin ko banana mein zamaane beet jate hain….(true--) Kehte hain her tamanna puri nai hoti…..(absolutely true--so dont anticipate much)
I dont understand your language though with the title itself i know to whom you are referring to..one of the few...
'Dil sey dil ki duri nehi hoti'.........oh nice! 'her tamanna puri nehi hoti'........true bahut achhaha likha! 10++++
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12/5/2025 10:31:42 AM # 1.0.0
it was a really super write.... you are gifted..! !