(((Broken Hearted Twice))) Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

(((Broken Hearted Twice)))

Rating: 4.3


</>The years are weighing me down most beloved
For i am but a shipwreck of a woman, my dear
Clinging to mid-lifes glorified Golden
Yet letting go of agony's bitter tears;
Looking through the windowpane of our life
Yellow fields-they oft' turn to pale green
Whispers from the winds of sweet surrender
Yet mistakes refuse to embellish my dreams;
Oh, oh, my most beloved
Am i now invisible to thine eye?
Do the Angels fear to tread near to me?
Or 'tis our re-union perhaps nigh?
Spheres of half-thought-half-spoken love words
Changed the course of Winters Arrows Of Ice
Tomorrow, oh tomorrow-what shall it bring-my darling?
In loving you-I am broken hearted...twice;



By: Theodora Onken
November 5,2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 07 November 2011

Thank You Romeo for your kind words! Theo

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Romeo Della Valle 05 November 2011

Wow! This amazing write looks like a Home Run with all the bases loaded on the 9th Inning! Rich in imagery and fined texture, this thought provoking write really touched me! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo (A new admirer) from New York City! ...

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