Brooding In Exclusive Solitude Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Brooding In Exclusive Solitude

Rating: 5.0


When there is someone known
That grieves.
Dont' try to tell them you believe...
And 'know' what flows and goes around inside.
When unknowing what is felt,
Is dealt by the one who feels its welts!

That would be surreal if...

Someone reached for you to help...
With a trusting faith a friend will aid them...
And not further torture their sorrows.

Give them what you can...
This may begin to lift a lingering doubt away~
Peeled to chase a feud brewing,
In a slow simmer that stews!

That would be surreal if...

This could change the mood left brooding...
In exclusive solitude!
This could be the quick fix needed,
To end a 'beef' between a few
Overcooked but kept out of view!

That would be surreal if...?

When there is someone known,
That grieves.
Dont' try to tell them you believe...
And 'know' what flows and goes around inside.
When unknowing what is felt,
Is dealt by the one who feels its welts!
And watch others run...
Expecting that done by you.
The one who comes to rescue!

That would be surreal if...
Not possible!

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