The sound of the rain mimics my racing heart
The thuds in my chest beat against my aching ribs
I am being abused
by the looks of things
it may be fore the best
The oxygen is being robbed from my lungs
and with every breath I cringe
With every clap of the thunder
I begin to unhinge
Lost in what began as pain
I surrender to the darkness
Welcoming it's warmth
I relish in it's tight embrace
The grasp pulls me down
and what once was a tender caress
is now a suffocating hold
Well done Jordan, I enjoyed your poems. Waiting for more poems by you: -)
Your poem is really deep and full of emotional thoughts. It sounds like some one is giving up on something. Whatever happens there's hope everytime. You write well. You've selected your words carefully to express your emotions. Good work friend
You painted the image of pained hear so well. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'My Barren Mind'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A haunting Poem, Jordan. Thanks for sharing Peace