Building Castles In The Air Poem by Qiniso Mogale

Building Castles In The Air



Unrealistic expectations
Unreasonable dreams
Ridiculous endeavors
Pathetic deliberations
overambitious pursuits
Building castles in the air.

Leaping before they look
Jumping the gun
Shooting from the hip
Attempting to collect spilt milk
Putting all their eggs in one basket
Building castles in the air.

Not leaving a room for disappointment
Being overconfident
Being arrogant
Their fall is a mighty one
Their fall leaves them confounded
Their fall leaves them condemned
Their fall leaves them humbled
The castles they had built in the air crumble
They realize castles mustn't be built in the Air.

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: modern
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2017

Brilliant expression. Fantastic poem. Lastly they realize castles mustn't be built in the Air.

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