At the Mountain top I look down
and I reflect on my past
At the mountain top I look down
and I realize how far I've come
At the mountain top I see all the
obstacles I've surmounted
At the mountain I see all
the tests I've passed
At the Mountain top I'm grateful to
God for upholding me with His righteous right hand.
At the mountain top I remember
all the girls I've loved before
At the mountain top I look back on
the mistakes that should have been avoided
At the mountain top I look back on
the opportunities I should have utilized
At the mountain top I however realize that it's
no use crying over spilt milk.
At the Mountain Top I pay tribute
to my parents especially my mother
At the mountain top I pay tribute
to my teachers and mentors
At the Mountain top I honour also
my adversaries for bringing out the warrior in me
At the Mountain top I honour those who told
me uncomfortable truths
At the mountain top I realize that as long as I live
I still have more mountains to conquer.
The poem reflects the human face of the protagonist at the height of his achievements. Very real. At the Mountain top I'm grateful to God for upholding me with His righteous right hand. At the mountain top I look back on the mistakes that should have been avoided
A marvelous poem! Self knowledge is the main theme here, excellently worded and beautifully rendered. A 10 Full Score for the Voting. Thank you for sharing this powerful piece of poetry. ENJOY your BirthDAY TODAY. Many happy returns of the Day. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you. Amen.
the Mountain top has become a place of wonder, and spirituality and a place of deep Meditation. you have make use of the peace and tranquility on the top of the mountain. thank you my dear...... you are a spiritual Poet........a Poet of reflection..... thank you again... tony
Qiniso, your poem brings back some very pleasant memories of when I first climbed a mountain. And now because of your poem, I can revisit the mountain in my mind's eye and examine my life from the various perspectives that you've presented. Thank you for giving me that opportunity. Excellent write!
Your poem 'At The Mountain Top' is an arena that reveals the roles of the persons and progress of your life. So nicely you have presented here... At the mountain I see all the tests I've passed At the Mountain top I'm grateful to God for upholding me with His righteous right hand.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Right after having fought and won all battles, comes a time to reminsce. Very good piece Qiniso.
I thank you Kuda