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Buoyant (With Adoration)

Rating: 5.0

You don't know what you do to me
My world perches on your shoulder
Beams are filtering all I see
Shivers now build to a smolder

I seek to find my harmonic
Our epic quest since time began
Eager to shed the demonic
I wish to be a better man

Even my most jaded viewpoint
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Vaibhav Pandey 23 February 2009

I truly agree with wollfee sir...a perfect rhyme and rhythm..very expressive.

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

This is another fine rhythm and rhyme poem. There are no weaknesses in this poem. It has a wonderful structure and it is presented the way it should be. The reading is easy and the flow of the words is magical in some cases. Another treasure of a poem. GW62

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