Lizzy Tomlinson

Rookie (Dundee, Scotland.)

Burgling. - Poem by Lizzy Tomlinson

The burglar hides behind the shed,
He waits until we're all in bed.
And when he knows we're fast asleep.
Up to the window, he does creep.

In the window~frame, he puts a tool.
Grips it real tight, then gives a pull.
But worry not, he does no harm,
He's activated our alarm.


Comments about Burgling. by Lizzy Tomlinson

  • (4/30/2006 12:58:00 PM)


    That was an awesome poem..quite humorous...I loved it! (Report) Reply

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  • (4/30/2006 12:14:00 PM)


    i think the last line would be better off as 'he's ONLY activated our alarm.' other than that, i think it was good, easy read with a simple honest feel.

    best care,
    susanj
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 30, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 5, 2006


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