Tsira Gogeshvili

Rookie - 15 Points (29.07.1959. / Tbilisi)

But I’m A Woman - Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

(magram qali var)

I’d have been a good dog
To the devoted master;
I’d have been a worthy horse
For the rider – good and bold…
If I were a flower
I’d be called “Violet”,
And – “Sparrow”
If I were a bird.
If I were water,
I’d babble like
A mountain brook…
But I’m a woman,
Not noticeable,
And not overlooked.
I’m not a dog,
But I’m still reliable…

Translated from Georgian


Comments about But I’m A Woman by Tsira Gogeshvili

  • (11/28/2011 10:26:00 AM)


    Thanks for such amazing an impromptu.
    You are right, for we each must has tried to be alone which to atone...
    Happiness to you dear Sidi.. :)
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  • (11/28/2011 12:43:00 AM)


    But I'm a simple man
    One on whom you must demand
    The love and trust that is due
    To a woman such as you.

    Yet, when the end comes near
    There is much to fear
    For each has tried to be alone
    Leaving much for which to atone.

    s
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/20/2011 6:54:00 AM)


    a beautiful ink, Tsira.deserves >100.thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bert Bell (10/22/2010 12:48:00 AM)


    What a marvelous poem, Tsira, It's such a beautifully expessed idea with great images and evocative lines. Very touching, and simply lovely poetry.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Ramin Chaman (10/20/2009 4:17:00 PM)


    A limpid poem..chiefly this line...But I’m still reliable…10+ (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2009 11:08:00 AM)


    But I’m a woman,
    Not noticeable,
    And not overlooked.


    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (6/10/2009 12:18:00 AM)


    good expressions........finding words to give comments........naturally woman are strongest and woman are the showering love on earth ........ (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/4/2009 12:09:00 PM)


    If brief I would like to say that it is undoubtedly a thoughts provoking splendid poem!
    You are not a woman, you are a person—an outstanding poet.
    With love 10+++
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  • C. P. Sharma (2/20/2009 8:20:00 AM)


    An awesome expressive poem with fanciful wandering mind.
    CP
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  • (1/24/2009 3:31:00 AM)


    Lovely interpratation of gender Tsira...enjoyed this....thank you...Fi (Report) Reply

  • Andrew Blakemore (11/14/2008 5:06:00 PM)


    A nice piece of work Tsira, well worthy of a 10. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/4/2008 12:31:00 PM)


    Neither man nor woman, we are person. This is a wonderful poem expressing the gender issue in a poetic manner. My 10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • (6/4/2008 1:49:00 AM)


    This is a rather plain poem, so I gave it a plain score. There
    are a few nice lines in here but that's about it.An interesting
    opening and closing with a dog. I suppose there is meaning there.

    GW62
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  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (5/6/2008 12:30:00 PM)


    Women is the creator, mother, sister, wife, friend, professional, lover and so many things in one person. We notice everywhere the Phenominal Women nowadays................good writing of deep emotions (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2008 7:44:00 AM)


    Much more than reliable! And a lark, not a sparrow; a waterfall, not a brook. I love this quirky piece>
    Fx
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011


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