I was thrown out of my house
and was beaten till my blood dried
but i never cried.
My best friend; why i called him my best?
Cheated me and took all my money after throwing me in a side
but i never cried.
My love, or so called my love
bluffed me and in my life brought a tide
but i never cried.
I was beaten, cheated and bluffed
so i started doing drugs
I began to drink the whole wine in a sip
and I went on a trip
'A trip', no 'The trip' to my past
when i was left forlornly in a bomb blast
the new family kept me as a mere prisoner
and threw me out of the house when i was a junior.
For no reason by the whole world i was criticized
but i never cried.
At my wedding day, the girl ran away who was my bride
but i never cried.
In thinking all the past moments
A tear rolled down my cheeks
I found myself crying
I don't know why, how and all but that time i cried.
I knew that fire evaporates water
So I burned my eyes and I died....!
¤ D END ¤
don'tcry mysweetheart coz we love ur poetries...don't be sad coz we all love you...whenever u are lonely, just express urself in poetry, all u will know, is u r healed and feel okay...dont drugs, dont kill, dont hate someone and dont blame urself...life is sometimes not nice but remember, after the rain comes sunshine...ur piece is well expressed, well written...cheers
while reading the lines'my best friend; why i called him my best? Cheated me and took all my money and threw me in a side' i could see myself doing that to you *sigh*you know how much i love money btw nice one bro
wow; ; ; this poem is very well written. but also very painful even read.....but i kann say irelate. because i never cry; i writee
I enjoy the way you use your words. Most of this poem was great, but it could be better. I can relate which is good and i like how you say it how it is. Life isn't always rainbows and butterflies, because 'then life would be death and our breath would be song, we'd have no need to live, for there'd be nothing wrong.' I would suggest more editting, and the use of written words, you have more to write on than a phone don't you?
Good one liked it very much stood brave and at last had to give up, pain, hurt anger, and disappointment all well said with great feelings...Thanks for sharing...
Nice one. You certainly have done a great job expressing pain, anger, disappointment, and hurt so well with your wonderful words.
This is a beautiful poem showing strength at first, and at the end you really see the weakness. I can feel myself in this poem. Very good. I love it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
aww i like this poem it expresses hurt and pain its beautiful i love you keep on writing