But Not Before Poem by Fred Babbin

But Not Before

Rating: 5.0


My poems:
you are the living, moving,
flesh of words
that are formed by me.
I am your creator,
as God is the Creator
for some, for them.

But there is no 'them', or 'we'
for I don't believe in Duality.
And when we all agree
to believe in 'non-Duality',
We will be free, but not before.,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 03 December 2007

Do you just turn POETRY on...Like a TAP? Gifted! Roger,

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Jim Armstrong 12 December 2008

You are indeed a great poet!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

A beautiful poem. Nicely composed.10.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 August 2008

I liked your'ADVAITA' of poetry Sir. This brought a new insight in me. Thanks sathya narayana

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Jim Armstrong 13 December 2007

Well done! ! I really enjoyed this one.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 December 2007

very buddhist. i love. expand the ocean of my mind. thank you fred.

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