Deepti Agarwal


Bye! Bye! ! - Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Farewell! Dear friends
Here I pack my bags
It seems my journey
Has come to an end
Leaving me all in shags.

My heart is bleeding
Tears are rolling
Feelings are all fluttering
It’s all before I go
Sleeping and weeping.

Do not remember me much
Am not so famous as such
Do not weep for me
As you all can see
Am not worth your trust.

With all the fond memories
Keeping in mind beautiful sceneries
Here I go walking hand in hand
Towards the predefined journey
Where so Lonely I do stand.

BYE! BYE! !

20/03/08


Comments about Bye! Bye! ! by Deepti Agarwal

  • C. P. Sharma (9/7/2009 8:25:00 AM)


    Vehemently expressed.
    CP
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/2/2008 11:37:00 AM)


    'My heart is bleeding
    Tears are rolling
    Feelings are all fluttering
    It’s all before I go
    Sleeping and weeping.'

    Never ever never Deepti.
    Nice composition.
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  • (5/14/2008 2:44:00 AM)


    Nice lines ma'am........ (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (5/8/2008 11:14:00 AM)


    Here comes a few lines
    From an Irish prayer, for you -

    'May the road rise up to meet you,
    May the wind be ever at your back.
    May the sun shine warm upon your face
    And the rain fall softly on your fields.
    And until we meet again,
    May God hold you in the hollow of his hand.'
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  • (5/4/2008 4:22:00 PM)


    how can i ever forget this one... ma'am!
    this changed my life....
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  • (4/2/2008 7:14:00 AM)


    this poem reminds me the lines of Alfred Tennyson's 'Crossing the Bar'
    He says:
    'Sunset and evening star,
    And one clear call for me!
    And may there be no moaning of the bar,
    When I put out to sea,
    But such a tide as moving seems asleep,
    Too full for sound and foam,
    When that which drew from out the boundless deep
    Turns again home.

    Twilight and evening bell,
    And after that the dark!
    And may there be no sadness of farewell,
    When I embark;

    For tho' from out our bourne of Time and Place
    The flood may bear me far,
    I hope to see my Pilot face to face
    When I have crossed the bar.

    we should be optimist enogh to think of death positively.instead taking it as an unacceptable calamity.Still I like the tone.Keep it up.10/10
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  • (4/2/2008 6:45:00 AM)


    great title im kinda confused on meaning. is the poem talking about death? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008



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