Sk. Nurul Huda

Gold Star - 12,074 Points (Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India)

Call From My Heart. - Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

The time is to view two leaves rather leaves;
To lie lively again in blissful leaves
So leave the life of living with line-less leaves and waves
……… says my Heart.
Oh! It is the time again to make the waves;
Coupled with vibration and sound of snakes;
Rather shouting and crying of cheers and clapping,
Making marred chaotic mirth to cosmos and meaning.
……… says my Heart.
It is the time for trying to following the deed, which,
Carrying the solution of the Master made for W.H;
To be again with the smiling flowers of future,
Again mingling my valor with more smiling and fixture;
……… says my Heart.
So hire a huge hit and win over all the walls hard;
Coming as battering troops from my upper side
With my forceful faultless flowing red's flood.
……… says my Heart.
So soundly harboring from one to one and having in one,
Now make another one to shape the big one,
To be again with the forgotten and fastened First One.
……… says my Heart.

©sk Nurul Huda for 'Songs of 26'.

Topic(s) of this poem: heaven, life, marriage

Form: Epithalamion


Poet's Notes about The Poem

'fastened First one' is Heaven..from where we come to earth and complete our life circle and goes back to it...

Comments about Call From My Heart. by Sk. Nurul Huda

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/7/2017 11:16:00 AM)


    Leaves, blissful leaves waves;
    cheers and clapping,
    with the smiling flowWith my force
    fTo be again with the forgotten, mingling my valor
    faultless flowingers of future, ......


    This is unequalled insight into life and mysterious and a sense of secret in every line.. tony
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  • Raj Arumugam (7/9/2016 5:29:00 PM)


    very lyrical and evocative, Nurul...the lines have a very pleasing rhythm and sound quality (Report) Reply

    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (7/9/2016 8:30:00 PM)

    thank you very much for your encouraging comment....and evaluation.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2016 11:22:00 PM)


    so nice poem... heart says...10



    Have we not moved to modern period?
    Where people find it difficult to avoid
    Temptation and greediness
    With mad chase
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    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (6/13/2016 1:28:00 AM)

    Thank u very much....
    I am happy with thee....

  • (6/7/2016 10:11:00 AM)


    simply profound! This poem is one of profound insight. (Report) Reply

    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (6/13/2016 11:10:00 AM)

    thank you very much....i am glad with you...

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/18/2016 4:45:00 AM)


    Let your heart lead you on! Along the path of the truth. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (11/22/2015 3:14:00 PM)


    Making marred chaotic mirth to cosmos and meaning........... i like the alliterations, BUT, unlike Dr. tony Brahmin (see comment, below) , i do NOT 'like the sense of mystery always. mystery is ok sometimes. sometimes mystery makes a very good story/poem. but, for me, when mystery is due to not understanding the meanings of the words linked together, i don't care for it very much, if at all. : (

    [again some nice alliterations]:

    With my forceful faultless flouring red’s flood.............BUT do you want flouring or flowering or flowing? ? does red's equals blood's? ?

    sorry, Heart, we don't 'speak' the same language! but, thanks (i think) for sharing.

    bri ;)
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/29/2015 7:36:00 AM)


    my heart says..........
    there is a sense of mystery all through the poem. i like the sense of mystery always. thank you very much
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    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (11/3/2015 8:44:00 AM)

    thank you very much....i feel warm and increase of the speed of the blood of y heart now.. pls do read my Incompletely complete and complete......thank you again..gd evening...

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 26, 2016


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