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Calling Wind

Rating: 4.9

I thought I heard your voice
somewhere in the wind...
I followed it by choice
until its calling thinned.

When completely dissapeared
'twas nothing left to hear,
I turned around in dread
crying many silent tear.

James Timothy Jarrett 20 January 2013

Very well written. If you have never been there, you will think it is a nice collection of words

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The 4am Poet Worm 26 July 2011

mrs plumb plumb... this expresses exactly how i feel....: (

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Adeline Foster 21 June 2011

Sally: The thought behind this was intrigueing. I liked it, try mine -Lies. Adeline

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Sally P. P. 25 February 2020

Thankyou, Adeline. Will do.

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Liliana Roman 23 April 2011

this was very beutiful indeed. i felt the longing and hurt in the poem.

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Lynn Glover 03 February 2011

Very beautifully written, Sally, the rhyming I found to be outstanding as well as the flow of the poem. Good Work. A 10.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 October 2010

Clairaudience [poets are so] nicely used metaphorically… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Sally Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 01 October 2010

Who is this one calling? ? ? Looking at the poem and how you wrote it, you expressed and imparted to the poem the full emotion/expression which you had when you wrote the poem. very well penned.

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