Can Love End? Poem by Steven Iceberg

Can Love End?



Your smile in the playground
The thoughts in my mind
Your words are just different
There sweet and there kind

The way you stare
Into my eyes
When you touch my hand
I hypnotise

When our time ends
My friend
God understands
That two hearts won't mend

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 30 March 2009

It takes a special kind of love to mend a broken heart, but when it happens happiness runs through your being placing those shattered pieces together. Loves the best medicine, but too much can make you sick

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Hari Khabrani 06 April 2009

Dear Poet, Wherein can love end? Never but mends and amends the sphereics........Dear poem is readable but love never ends.

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 12 April 2009

wow...powerful and good... I guess 'Yes, love can end' do you know why can love end? Love can end because unfortunately .........'LOVE was NEVER meant FOREVER'.........

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 12 April 2009

The love that can end, NEVER really began.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

love is never ending u lose it, it only regenerates.. lovely poem u r talented and lovely

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Dr. Antony theodore 20 November 2018

The way you stare Into my eyes When you touch my hand I hypnotise..a very fine love poem which provokes us to think, thank u. tony

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Nangula Immanuel 10 August 2009

WOW! this is such a sweet poem. I especially love the ending! gREAT WORK! 10 :)

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Kayleigh Tongue 22 April 2009

your poem (can love end?) is lovely and it was great. you are very good at writing poem. it was FAB! ! ! :) XD

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Johannes Yeboah 14 April 2009

u are a really good poet! ! .i like the rhyme and the diction.your choice of words really nailed dis poem! ! wen love ends, it leaves two hearts unmended INDEED! ! ..a masterpiece.ur score: Infinity! !

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Karla Bardanza 13 April 2009

Lovely poem! 10+++++++++

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