Your smile in the playground
The thoughts in my mind
Your words are just different
There sweet and there kind
The way you stare
Into my eyes
When you touch my hand
I hypnotise
When our time ends
My friend
God understands
That two hearts won't mend
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Dear Poet, Wherein can love end? Never but mends and amends the sphereics........Dear poem is readable but love never ends.
wow...powerful and good... I guess 'Yes, love can end' do you know why can love end? Love can end because unfortunately .........'LOVE was NEVER meant FOREVER'.........
love is never ending u lose it, it only regenerates.. lovely poem u r talented and lovely
The way you stare Into my eyes When you touch my hand I hypnotise..a very fine love poem which provokes us to think, thank u. tony
WOW! this is such a sweet poem. I especially love the ending! gREAT WORK! 10 :)
your poem (can love end?) is lovely and it was great. you are very good at writing poem. it was FAB! ! ! :) XD
u are a really good poet! ! .i like the rhyme and the diction.your choice of words really nailed dis poem! ! wen love ends, it leaves two hearts unmended INDEED! ! ..a masterpiece.ur score: Infinity! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It takes a special kind of love to mend a broken heart, but when it happens happiness runs through your being placing those shattered pieces together. Loves the best medicine, but too much can make you sick