Can't Be Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Can't Be

Rating: 5.0


Can now be left alone

Feeling so clear
In mind no fear
She has vision
To see without confusion

Eyes are closed
As if flower has posed
For night rest
She stands ah err best

No one can predict
And indict
For her behavior
It is reflected with honor

I raise her head
And tried to read
It is full with compassion
Nothing unsaid in relation

Her eye brows beat me
And compels not to flee
She can't be left alone
Once the wind has gone

Can't Be
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2016

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

Her eye brows beat me And compels not to flee....wonderful expression dear poet. Stay blessed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

She has vision to see without confusion....excellent!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2016

welcome JaiRam Tiwari likes this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 10 Jan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2016

Rusilo Wati Nice sleeping Unlike · Reply · 1 · 12 mins 10 Jan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2016

welcome lokendrapurursh Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 10 Jan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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