Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Can't Be - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Can now be left alone

Feeling so clear
In mind no fear
She has vision
To see without confusion

Eyes are closed
As if flower has posed
For night rest
She stands ah err best

No one can predict
And indict
For her behavior
It is reflected with honor

I raise her head
And tried to read
It is full with compassion
Nothing unsaid in relation

Her eye brows beat me
And compels not to flee
She can't be left alone
Once the wind has gone

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016



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