Can You? Poem by Lacie Wasserman

Can You?

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I dont know whats wrong with me. Do you? Can you help me figure out how I feel? I'm empty inside. All closed up. Confused. One moment I'm happy and then the next I'm not. Will you help me? Listen to me? Open up your ears. Hear me out. Can you save me from spiralling downward? Being twisted into a little ball. Torn limb by limb into little peices. Hatered filled by rage. Happiness filled with joy. Screaming with frustration. Can you help me? Can you save me?

Wednesday, June 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: confused,frustration,happiness,happy,joy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Fish 10 October 2009

The rollercoaster of life you so well describe the ups and downs such utter extremes that seem a mystery. I like the poem. The confusion with the extremes of life, the despair and utter futility. Life can be quite confusing at times for people of any age. Keep up the good work. There is a ton of emotion in the poem. Read some of my poems if you like: http: //www.poemhunter.com/matthew-de-gasperi/

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Can you help me? Can you save me? .... ssurely. u know what u r? u will get answer read mine, , individual and canany body tell me?

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Lacie Wasserman

Lacie Wasserman

Nebraska
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