You said you were sure. It wasnt what I thought.
That was a lie. You were fake.
But I believed you and took a higher stake.
You whispered little nothings in my ear.
I mistook them for big somethings.
You and your empty promises.
It was me who was bidding on something I couldnt win.
Your heart.
I found out things I wish I would have known from the start before.
Just you and your thoughts to score.
Tired of being let down. Hopeing I was makeing you proud.
Believing your silly nothings. Beliving your lies.
So I say good bye.
To you and your empty promises.
Lacie that was a truly beautiful piece...Keep writing you are a very talented young lady - along the way you will learn to identify the true from the less true....10+++
Empty mind, empty heart, empty thoughts, but full of themselves. Meet too many of these type people and you learn to spot them right away. :) DC
Interesting it seem that yousea lot of the same vocab and descriptions that i like to use myself, Beatiful write keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Empty promises exist in empty eyes that never lie.10.