MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Can You Guide Me? ~ [22 Words Poetry] - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Goggled on ~
‘Do It Yourself
Made Easy.'

Wow!
Got on all
Subjects!

Bejesus! !

Not on
My
Own
Cremation! !

Can
Googlers
Guide
Me.


Comments about ~ Can You Guide Me? ~ [22 Words Poetry] by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Amitabha Bagchi (10/2/2012 12:05:00 PM)

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    ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
    ========================================
    From: Kee Thampi
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann
    Date-Time: 9/29/2012 11: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: hi
    ----------
    dearest poetess never write like this
    Not on
    My
    Own
    Cremation! !
    be with good mind
    kee


    ==
    Posted thro’ kindness of AB London
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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (5/28/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    Great canvas

    Novel thought

    Deep impact on 'going-to-die' persons specially in west

    Congrat for foresight in poetic format...10++
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  • Rediffusion [bapi] Effusion [chakravorty] (5/22/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    Out of desperation in materialistic Western Life Style and Mind Set this poem got momentum

    And it'll surely swell like snowball in psyche of Empty-Nest-Syndrome in West

    India has not reached to that scale yet...may be gasping to reach there as blindly we're becoming 'Copy-Cat' of West

    Good Poem a bonk [hit hard] to consumerist society

    Thanks sharing...10+
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  • Katang Chakravorty (5/11/2012 12:47:00 PM)

    It is not light reading poem

    Mr. Bagchi rightly pointed out concern about funeral in west...

    Serious poem indeed please ponder readers what poet written in 'white-Ink'
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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/6/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    Indeed so it is needed

    As in West funeral and coffin charges and costs too high

    And going-die persons are anxious about it

    Good contemplative poem

    Others may look in diluted form...

    But I see in this canvas...good poem for the elderly..must be ten plus plus
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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (5/2/2012 11:32:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha...Knows who...if one knows...how one will guide...good pun 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/27/2012 10:13:00 AM)

    Wow...Great one in short...funny..and enjoying Regards ~ niv (Report)Reply

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  • Photode Photode (4/19/2012 10:48:00 AM)

    I say Bejesus, ah, golly, by Jove, geez

    Thro' all these I express my utter surprise for such unconventional poem...

    Never read such before Offs

    Sure ten
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    yours always nice poem to ponder..10

    do it your self if you can.
    add numbers and make ten
    think leisurely and then
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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (4/13/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    God is always ready to guide u and he is the best guide. a nice confession. (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (4/6/2012 10:18:00 PM)

    a thinking unexpected way, the reading much relished (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (4/4/2012 11:50:00 PM)

    I love your critical mind and your very strong way of expressing your thoughts.
    Fantastic poetry in a very special style
    Excellent.
    I am happy to see you writing new poems again
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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (4/3/2012 11:28:00 AM)

    I am always pleased to read the poems of any person whose message to me begins with, 'I have read your poem (name) , (comment) and I would like you to read mine.' It is only gracious to request a reading after having also read anothers. Thank you.
    Adeline
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  • Louis CecileLouis Cecile (4/2/2012 7:10:00 AM)

    The laziness of modern life and how easy it is get confused are things that come to mind when reading this shor piece so well executed. Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Besa DedeBesa Dede (4/1/2012 5:46:00 PM)

    Nice short poem, Nivedita! I like it more soever for it compactness of thought, even in such short verses. Thank you for sharing
    ~Besa
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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (4/1/2012 2:20:00 PM)

    A few (22) powerful words that raise questions that can only be answered by a very personal point of view! Your talent and creative mind is shown here in this well penned short write! Power to you! Thank you for sharing my dear friend! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com
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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/1/2012 1:58:00 PM)

    Wow! ! Great one...cute on lighter side/ in shade tenner thanks sharing (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, April 2, 2012


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